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Shadows are alive and they follow slowly
Listening to my heart and still beating
Dreams are my hope and steps get me closer
Faith makes me stronger 
The light will find a way it's burning
Pieces of my reflection are slowly healing


Just a short and quick poem. :)
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4maya Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
I like the flow. It doesn't sound like describing contentment in my opinion. It sounds like... acceptance and moving on.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not good with titles. Though you are right. 
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4maya Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
It's fine, I'm not good either xD I left like 10 of my literature unnamed, untitled OTL
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I noticed that lol
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4maya Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
xD Got any suggestions for them?
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sometimes it's better to have no title. Know what I mean? To me that leaves more impact. You could use ("." ) a period for a title. Just a suggestion. 
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4maya Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist
I know that one. I just thought "." was being too secretive and or lazy for a title. Untitled has a nice ring to it. 
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That works. 
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MrHighsky Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Light always finds a way. Good to know you are still hopeful.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes it does. I'm trying to be.
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malumagirl Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Wow youre good :)
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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malumagirl Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014
welcome! :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
It's simple but filled with hope and willpower. It's great :)
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)
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:iconghostoftheemptygrave:
No problem :)
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely! :squee: <3
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :aww:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. <3
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:) :heart:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconloveloveplz:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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AzureNebulae Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're so nice! :iconblushplz:
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You are too :blush:
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