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The tears down my face
Silently they fall with pain
Shed no tears you say 
I told you I'm going to be fine 

A promise to remember 
You stand there 
I'm here and no need to worry
Don't leave and I won't either 

The past is behind us 
Mistakes make you stronger 
You're special in your own way
Never forget who are

A promise to keep fighting 
To keep close 
Something new and gained 
Something felt and never changed 
Something that came to me....
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Dreamworld88 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
I like it, but it seems like each half belongs to a separate poem, it doesn't transition well.  
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Like a separate poem? 
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:icondreamworld88:
Dreamworld88 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Writer
Yes, it just needs some tweaking. Nothing major.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh ok, just wasn't sure what you meant.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
A quite positive message despite the sad tone. Well done :)
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:iconklove4ever:
KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just a sad memory I have and thanks :) 
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:iconkillerlord123:
killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
I guess we all have these. And you're welcome.
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Live and learn.
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killerlord123 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
Yep...
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KLove4Ever Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mhm...
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